He stood at the brink
No cloud in the sky
Awatching the field of play
As shadows did rise
From actors unknown
His worries drifted away
A mist in his mind
Was lifted, removed
When beauty rose into place
A precious short time
‘Fore he was forced down
He could see the gold of her face
She lowered her gaze
To meet his eye
But smiled as he fell off the ledge
His dying tribute
He sang with the stars
Then he sank and she climbed to the edge
She looked at the world
And started to throw
A red light over it all
For well she perceived
How short was the time
‘Til also she must give in and fall
And the Moon in his grave
Not dead but asleep
Did not mourn over days of yore
For he knew in his dreams
That the hour drew near
When he would glimpse his beloved Sun once more.
This is an older piece that I wrote back in January 2007. By that time I had just become unemployed for the first time in my life and would soon (though I didn’t know it at the time) begin working as a freelance music journalist. That step has lead me to where I am today. Life’s certainly full of surprises.
This is really wonderful. Even for a clouded mind like mine, by the end it painted a picture fully vivid I could enjoy
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Thank you, I’m really glad to hear it!
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And you are welcome! I know what goes into works like this, and it always pulls the waves of the mind
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That’s a very beautiful way of putting it! I found your site through your comment and really liked your stuff. Will definitely be a recurring visitor 🙂
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Something comes up a decade later and sounds so amazing.
It must have been tough, but you’re amazingly braze & amazing. 🙂
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Thank you so much, this comment really made my day! 🙂
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